by Inkysquid718
I went back and read your first chapter before I read this one. They are both well written and very HOT!
I appreciate the conflict and intensity of the characters relationship and how you have structured the story.
Beautifully written story so far, now keep it up. Another ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ for this chapter.
Great story, whew! I love that girl!! 'I don't care, just stfu and let me play with your dick!' Hehehe! I love how forward she is. I was boo-hissing his cold hearted ass though, lol. She pours her heart out and he's all 'I love you but suck it up buttercup!' Damn!
Gave it a four out of five. Would have been perfect but it really irritated me that the hymen was, in yet another story on this site, in the wrong spot! Doh!
Anywho, looking forward to the thrills and chills of the next chapter!!
Yes, a nice story, a good beginning for a couple that has doubts but has love and desire too. I hope Katie desires him so much that they decide to mutually build a life together regardless of what their parents say. Beautiful love and gentle but hard sex too. I think Katie will become a wild cat in bed with him. Cannot wait for more, thank you.