All Comments on 'Resolution Loophole'

by Jemma_Jane

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

would like to see it continue with a shower scene and more detail

estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Really Good

Really good and hot, characters that are believable and some good stage setting. In fact, good enough to make me put down my Gin-and-Tonic, and quibble it. Quibbles follow via "Send Feedback."

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 12 years ago
Entrancing

and mostly very well-written. You could use an editor, though, to sort out the wee glitches before you post.

I don't normally read stories about sex between women, but was drawn to this by the quality of your other stories. I'm so glad I read it. Please keep writing. With many thanks for this.

obscuredobscuredover 12 years ago
Belltown

Belltown is my favorite part of Seattle :) Great story about a magical encounter. Loved it all!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Moore

Fun story. Not a big fan of lesbian sex unless it gets really discriptive. Still a great story and will read more of your work.

Thanks

T

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