by __Lisa__
with move resolving to take place for the future, TK U MLJ LV NV
You are good, Lisa! Literotica needs a class act bi and you are it!
Absolutely remarkable, Lisa. I felt every sensation, and the bond between all the characters is remarkable.
Can't think of anything I've read on this, or any site, that has made me this fucking horny. Beautifully done.
I thought Lucas missed his opportunity during the first fireworks show.
Nice of Beth to step up and reasure her friend of Lucas direction for the second show. A nice loving storyline that reafirms my suspicions that youth isn't wasted on the young. I also suspected that once would not be enough, I think Lisa_ agrees. Have a happy new year Lisa_ .
Oh wow, please please please continue this! It would be amazing to see the chemistry between Lucas and Ellie just explode and the frustration and intensity it would entail especially where Lucas is concerned would be something to behold, maybe hook Beth up with a different guy after it all so that Ellie won’t feel bad about getting with Lucas... I don’t know, just work your magic on this pleaseeeee🙏🏻
I rated this story 5 stars some time ago. I came back today and read it again, and it is simply one of the best erotic stories I have ever read, here or elsewhere. Tremendous, hot, honest, raw, and expertly paced.
OMG super hot and sexy. Not what I first expected but definitely will read again!!