by FeistyScorpio
This was great... very erotic... nice build up and wonderfully described with a great twist at the end...
Would love to read more Feisty!!!
Stud x
I think the story was very good. And very sexy as well. I really think you should try writing again someday.
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<p>Garion
who ever thought a little "Yee-OUCH!" sould bring sooo much pleasure!!
great story
Damn this was hot! I loved how you slowly built up the fire, slowly adding more fuel to the flames until it was raging out of control. I can't wait to read more from you.
Very well written .. very very sexy .. Loved everything about it!
Sexy sexy - great date night! AND when a woman goes to the lengths of the wax job - she deserves to be well loved