All Comments on 'Rest Stop and the Road Side Sex'

English must not be your primary language.

Could have been good, but was impossible to read!!!

this version is not the "final edited".

the correct and readable version will publish in fews days, waiting for approving.

The difficulty reading is what MADE this little epic worth the trouble. Sounds and reads like it was written by An Innocent who wrote her impression of what the real world is like. The real world makes her horny. I liked it.

Back to the safety of The Monastery ! !

I agree with Freedombase: the twisted sentences and ungrammatical constructions made this fascinating.

When it gets edited, please add more sex.