All Comments on 'Restart'

But incomplete. I think something’s wrong with the upload or something because the last sentence was broken off.

Thanks, I've resubmitted, hopefully the end is included this time.

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Please continue the story

Please continue

Bravo. What a Wonderful story. I love the way you describe the feelings of your heroes.

Cannot wait for more.

Greetings from Switzerland

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You can't stop here. Waiting for the ending.

I liked the way you wove the sex into the story. A few instances of wrong word, "of" instead of "off", for example, but a very good story none the less. Anxious to see where you take it from here. Maybe a bit long for a chapter. I'd have broken it where they were "captured" by the natives, and perhaps again when they are married/get pregnant.

I like the healthy obsession with erections. If all women thought like this, we men would lead easier lives.

This is the best one I have ever read.

After over 20 years, I expect the chopper to be sent away. They cannot still be looking.

the best so far..