All Comments on 'Restaurant Surprise Ch. 01'

Far, Far too short. Why not wait till you've written a decent amount and then post it. There seems to be a plague of these short chapter submissions on Lit.

Disagree with last comment. I prefer shorter postings than ploughing through never-ending stories on one long screen. Don't always have time to read long ones. Maybe some people have enough time on their hands but a lot of others don't.

Actually I quite like the build up. I am looking forward to seeing how things heat up in the next chapter.

Way too short for a proper build-up...

Well some people obviously need more to get their imaginations into gear. The build-up was enough to get me going!! I want to see what happens next. :-)

A nice teaser for the longer chapter 2 - good idea!

Love all of your stories,

since I just found them,

but very intriguing and

can't wait for more from this one..

Keep us cumming back for more shall you?