All Comments on 'Restoring a House Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Oh no...!!!!

I know it had to end sometime, but the ending may have been rushed. Would love to have seen a few more chapters. Great Story

guybguybover 7 years ago
Just a comment

Just wonderful!

bigbob2406bigbob2406over 7 years ago

As usual a lovely story from you.I just love your light hearted view of sexual relations.Dont we all wish we could be a part of a community like this ??Looking forward to your next offering.Thanks !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Darn!

Over too fast. Wanted more cause I'm a greedy girl.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great...but too short

I agree that story ended too soon. You did a really great job setting things up in the first couple of chapters but then there was a rather abrupt ending. I think you could have said more about the completion of the renovation, some details about the wedding, honeymoon, setting up the B and B, etc. I was really getting into these characters when everything ended. I must say though that I really enjoyed this story.

More please!!!

PapaMikePapaMikeabout 7 years ago
I wanted

at least one more chapter. As fsr as it goes, it's a great story.

PapaMikePapaMikeabout 7 years ago
Yup,

another chapter. Or two.

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

I agree, the author needs to write a few more chapters. 5 stars so far.

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