All Comments on 'Restrained Surprise'

by Phils08

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legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesalmost 7 years ago
Erotic and Arousing, but

There are too many "my"s when there should be "me"s. Found that distracting enough to cost you a rating star. So only 4 instead of 5. A few other glitches too, but a very good story overall.

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