All Comments on 'Retard Pt. 03'

so he is no better then brandi since he raped 2 girls

Well he is no genius... He is actually a retard... He raped 2 girls.... Wow... And what about when he says to scott something like.."it is not just her" it is that Scott is a greater retard else i can imagine where that conversation would have gone.... Come on you have powers over time be creative... I would say finish the legal stuff and grow up literally grow up using your powers and blame It l on later growth spurt...

How does getting a husband and wife to have sex equate to them being ok with this dumbass seducing their virgin daughter? That definitely makes the top-ten-most-stupid-things-I've-read-on-literotica list, and I've read thousands of stories here.

Nailed a couple skanks, yep he did.

So far I think that the plot line is really good... I am really worried though that it will become very unbelievable, and that Brandi and Mary Jo will become friends, and suddenly there are threesomes every scene... My own personal advice, don't pretend that his life is perfect now, and that he has two super hot models to bang at his leisure, have him go to school still, and let him be bullied or get in trouble, something negative. Or have some negative repercussions about what he has been doing, as far as screwing with time to embarrass people and be selfish, you have picked a very difficult path by turning Simon into this sort of character... It is very difficult to sympathize with a protagonist, when you really dislike everything that they do... It isn't impossible, but I really would not recommend attempting it since it can backfire, and lead to a main character that the readers want to see fail. Oh and also Mary Jo really wouldn't be that slutty I think, it is getting a bit out of hand I think, her wanting to sleep with him is cute and all, but then her constantly talking about how she wants him to be her first and all of this other crap... It's cute, but I think she told him she wants him to be her first, before he even showed that he has feelings for her. Whatever though, I still gave it five stars, and plan to read the rest of the chapters when they are posted... And I'm not the author so I really shouldn't pretend to be one.

I know it is the usual benefit of time manipulation but it seems to go against character and maybe this time it could be used for pleasure giving, not penetration and rape.

otherwise, I enjoy this story and its concept

I think the rape is creative and not as brutal as some stories I've read. Keep up the good work.

Really enjoying this. A proper story,not just fucking. 😊

Will we see another chapter to this series?

It kind of reminds me of a more adult version of "Flowers For Algernon". An old classic.