All Comments on 'Retirement'

by Double_Dee

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chytownchytownabout 6 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

glenboy2glenboy2about 6 years ago
Outstanding!

Great story! More!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awesome start

I see an ongoing story line here

Whirling DervishWhirling Dervishabout 6 years ago
Good first submission

It went a little too fast for me. However, it was a plausible and fairly well-written story. I would suggest using one of the editors here on Lit. to help polish your story. 4 stars

sunpuppysunpuppyabout 6 years ago
P became Patricia.

Great story, can’t wait for the next customer to come in.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Generic start...

Your profile leads me to think you had secret affairs and want to expound with erotic stories. The pic looks great, a fine tuned woman. Maybe I will like your writing about an escapade with a young submissive guy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
“P”

Love the story...however why do you call her “P” initially to not reveal her identity...then Later reference her name as “Patricia”...?

CanadianBigDaddyCanadianBigDaddyabout 6 years ago
wow

Fucking amazing Dee

WatcherRobWatcherRobabout 6 years ago
New "job"??

Sorry honey this sounds like w......to me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago
I'd immediately grab that part time job!

I've never ever thought of prostitution. Your story got my pussy gushing! Should I start actually seriously thinking about it?

I'm a white married redheaded wife and Mother. My redheaded daughter is starting college this year. I'm 5'9", 38DD-30-36, extremely orally inclined and absolutely love SEX!

I'm married to the original 60 second man. In fact he usually shoots his small load all over the lips of my pussy.

I am constantly horny, constantly sexually frustrated, and needing to be fucked hard and deep.

Orpheum69

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