All Comments on 'Return of the Dragons'

I really enjoyed the beginning of your story it had a good opening and u had great discription but why stop where you did alotmore could have bin explaned

Don't know just how I could have survived without it.

Good start but but the sex was short and rather bland once it got started.

The abrupt ending was also dissapointing.

I think this story has a great deal of potential. If you expanded upon the sex or, perhaps wrote a sequel.. or maybe wrote about the three months in between? -hinthint- :,D

I throughly enjoyed your story, such a twist at the end. I was trying to figure out how a man would lay an egg but you answered it in the end :D Great read!!!!

This is one of my favorites on literotica. I would love love love to read about the dragon king making jake his submissive whore. It's a real turn on to think about.

This is an awesome story, but I have been wondering for a while of you could write a sequel perhaps from jake's view after a year or even just the dragon's side of the story

I was just getting into it.

This is fucking disgusting