All Comments on 'Return to the Master Ch. 01'

Excellent work. Very much looking forward to the continuation of this series.

Wonderful character development and plot line. No idea how this story arc is going to pan out since the last mention of Beth in the other story seems to indicate that our hero never sees her again. That would seem to imply that he doesn't rescue her, thus acquiring another slave to try and salvage.

Curiuoser and curiouser....

I get the feeling Marcus is going to be her True Master

Good character development. I'm sure Marcus is her true master. I do think Marcus would get more dolls, probably 3 more. Can't wait to read more

Yay! I am so very glad you are creating a series!

I love this story can't wait to see how it ends

I've been waiting for more chapters since May, you've gotta work with me here lol. Love this story, can't wait to see where it heads!

more to come?