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by Ssh2506

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quietman200quietman200almost 11 years ago
Nicely done

Is there more to come? I mean it stsnds on its own just fine, but I can see potential for a sequel. They have history, so it would be kind of natural. Then again, maybe it's best left alone -- just end it with that moment. Good story. I liked the pacing. They didn't rip each other's clothes off right, even though they both wanted to. Their conversation had some ebb and flow to it that kept my attention. I liked some of your expressions: "...the angel gave up and flew away." Priceless! Nice job.

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