All Comments on 'Reunited'

Nicely done. Thank you

Sorry, couldn't even get through half a page. Did you even proof read?

These taken from less than half a page-

"Brian's straight strands of her fell on his closed lids loosely"

Did you mean HAIR?

"Brian was steering in his sleep by the time she returned"

Steering?

"he had attempted to somehow get his ruffled her to lie flatter"

Again with HER instead of HAIR.

Those were only a few of the errors in such a small amount I read. I didn't vote.

Thanks for the read. Looking forward to your future submissions.

This story is a very nice romance, but it is much too short in all aspects. The writing is good, but not excellent; a good editor would have helped make it even better.