All Comments on 'Reunited Ch. 01'

This was a good start. Just enough information to make me wat to see the rest of the tale.

But it should be a little longer, this was like a trailer for a movie, just enough to get your attention, but not enough to have any real depth. 4 but with a couple extra pages it could be a 5

At least ch 2 is waiting to be read. Thanks for sharing.