by Mistress_L
Excellent. This brings back very present memories of being in service to my Mistress in the past. Very well written also just erotic enough with the pain and control of the young Mistress.
Wow, I loved how she utterly submitted and was sooo disciplined and sopping wet and humiliated. Beautiful.
I love the slow (but not too slow) build to the utter submission! Sooo hot!
Love the build up in the storey and looking forward to seeing how you will develop the storey.
I would note that the consent does not appear to be freely given but very well done .