by H'venlee
This was good stuff! There was so much left unsaid that spoke volumes. Her motive, what happened before & after.
It worked on many different levels.
They both had wonderful sex and he didn't know who she was. Revenge would have been to get him near the edge and then back off. And then get him close to ejaculating again and then stopping. Finally when he is so frustrated that he is almost screaming for her to finish him, she stops and gets up and smiles at him and says "have a nice day, dickhead" as she walks away.
He got your pussy again, where's the revenge?
The revenge that is. I saw the sex. I missed how it was, in any way, shape or form revenge.
because It left so much to be desired for the readers.
revenge?
where? and against whom?