All Comments on 'Revenge'

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Extreme BohunkExtreme Bohunkover 19 years ago
Very very good!

This was good stuff! There was so much left unsaid that spoke volumes. Her motive, what happened before & after.

It worked on many different levels.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Nicely done!

Very nice! One of the hottest stories on the site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
How was that revenge?

They both had wonderful sex and he didn't know who she was. Revenge would have been to get him near the edge and then back off. And then get him close to ejaculating again and then stopping. Finally when he is so frustrated that he is almost screaming for her to finish him, she stops and gets up and smiles at him and says "have a nice day, dickhead" as she walks away.

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
It does not seem like much revenge to me.

He got your pussy again, where's the revenge?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
DAMN! I missed it!

The revenge that is. I saw the sex. I missed how it was, in any way, shape or form revenge.

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
i hope it was good for her

because It left so much to be desired for the readers.

revenge?

where? and against whom?

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