All Comments on 'Revenge'

A little physiology lesson here: Most women don't ovulate while they're nursing. In theory, it's nature's way of making sure mothers can deal with one child before having another.

This story is too short. Why cut it off here?

The story could use a bit of copyediting.

this story blows BIG ass chunks!!! You really need to work on it before submitting such crap!!!

why stay around?

Hey you wasted my time. I see you have not submitted a story in a long time. I understand why.

Too mechanical. No emotion. UGH!

nothing to see here.

meh .

If I was married to Will, I certainly would make babies [plural] with Stan. Fantastic story.

Kid ???...Kid ???

Is that how you tell some one tnat they're going to be a FATHER ..????

AAAA++++

**Real Mature theme.🤔