All Comments on 'Revenge!'

Secondly, this was just plain bad writing. Even for fiction it was actions without rhyme or reason. And there wasn't a single likeable character in this whole mess. Who cares what happened. Hard to care about such disgusting people. Just plain bad, start to finish.

...And such a deep rabbit hole to fall into, Forced Fem, Incest, Sexual Bribery... other than bestiality and S&M, it hits most of the bases that's for sure. I had to finish reading it, just to see where it went. Like watching a really good stripper, you don't bother asking how she got everything on as its coming off, you just enjoy the show, lol! This is going to be its downfall though of course, folks are going to be pissed when they get to the end and finally see where it all ends. They shouldn't be angry, they could have stopped reading <sigh>... I gave it 3 stars for the effort because the author really should keep writing because overall its written well. Does it really have anything to do with TS/CD? Other than the forced fem (assumed by his being drugged) probably not. But two things (of so many, actually) stick out as... um... improbable. The first, the use of Bobby... a female would be logical. Then the removal of his tendons and ribs... then the final piece, his SRS... why wouldn't Hunter put that at the top of his 'op' list? At least, if money is no object. Bottom line? I like creativity and adventure... now... team that up with a structured storyline and a bit more realistic and engaging (to the reader) character construction and I think you've got some amazing chops, as they say. Cheers! --- Josie

What a ride, as someone else said. Wacky and endearing.

An obvious search and replace of a story Ive seen before. Did you not notice that Veronica's last name was Lodge? Dislodge and disFox are not interchangable.

right up until the ridiculous and unnecessary ending. I was fine with the fact that it was all just fantasy, but the ending doesn't fit.

"and discovered that all the money she had saved in her bank account had disappeared"

Lol.

Decent writing, but no attempts at logic whatsoever.

Wow what a story, didn't know that was going to happen with fox, I thought Jack was Tring to convert Bobby into his sex slave, but Jack was grooming Bobby for fox and the one thing I was hoping for Bobby to do good for him self because of all the manipulation he went threw well doesn't sound like jack got much of a deal maybe worse off, you did the job kept me interested till the end

Thank you love

And to all the boo hoo ers why can't you injoy the story for what it is a story,

Do you give the writers of Harry Potter shit oohh that not what the world is like

It's a story fiction not real that means it fallows no rules should have put a taking frog in the story, why no reason the less of a reason the better

to quote m night shamalamadingdong 'what a twist!' I did not see that last chapter coming like it did. too bad brandy didn't take the money, (I know I would've lol). but the story is called 'revenge'

maybe, we can get a sequel involving the real Peggy?

can't wait until thr 3rd installments of 'sweet baby' and thr one involving sissy candy and uncle Mike stories.

What revenge?

i REALLY enjoyed it until the end