All Comments on 'Revenge Ch. 01'

He simply reached up and drove his fingers into her eye sockets. She let go immediately. Of course his reach was longer than hers. Her head was completely in his reach and any one in that type of desperate situation would have done the same. You really didn't think this mess through. No stars for this implausible and utter drivel.

I feel sorry for the previous Anon who gets so into a knot over minor details that they can't appreciate a high quality and very erotic story. Although you mention "to be continued", I like that this chapter works well on a stand alone basis. Also refreshing that you found no need to spoil it by mentioning bra size or appendage length!

Don G pissed her off, somehow. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks for sharing.