All Comments on 'Revenge Fuck: Lily's Punishment'

Damned erotic and fairly plausible, well and crisply written. Overall very good. But the slap gave her an 'out' with her fiancé. It was probably enough for her to return to the reunion crying and claiming rape. Then there's physical evidence and positive ID. Got his rocks off in the dumbest possible way.

Two exes meeting again..;)) the girl,so hot...;))....you could've made this such a sexy non con!!;))...but....nope!!..the guy was so uncool and unsexy..sigh!! :((;))

This is my dream of how I will meet my old girl friend at our 40th, yes, I said 40th, reunion. I would STILL love to fuck her. In 1971-72, good girls did not put out, even in sunny California. Tracy, if you are reading this, I still want you.

She has all of the evidence of rape. Not a hot story at all. Left me cold.

From start to finish this story had me dripping. I'd love to be the girl in this case. Love your wording and how you managed to out the classy whire part in.

Bubba is your new bestis friend now......

What a waste.

Three stars because it has potential.

and the recipients should be aware knowing it was cumming, TK U MLJ LV NV

Well, another unfinished story. It would have been ok to end it the way you did even as there are so many different scenarios that come to mind. It would have been nicer to see what happens the rest of that night with her broken body. Does he steal her away for a few nights of beatings and debauchery; or does he leave just as her fiancé comes out looking for her?

Why does everyone want more. This was a revenge fuck, ten years after the breakup. Nothing more, nothing less. Good job. Keep writing.

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