All Comments on 'Revenge Goes Wrong'

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The ending really made no sense whatsoever. It's clear she learned nothing from the spanking and he has to be at least smart enough to realize that. Why would he subject himself to the humiliation when she's made it clear she doesn't want him?

WHAT THE FUCK?!

Nice twist! I like it much better than the straight up coercion.

Bit of a strange place to leave it and not sure why Derek gave up all the leverage he had._

i know more is coming.. nice , nice development

I thought this was the lamest one considering there was no sex therefore the entire story is pathetic

So,where's the last couple of paragraphs of this story?!

- Have to give it a 3,for "Incomplete"!