by Smut_Supreme
I quite enjoyed this story, but I didn't appreciate your attitude, implying, as it did, that you would flounce away if you didn't get the feedback the thought you deserved.
Go or stay - the decision is entirely yours; flouncing isn't popular, and it isn't effective either.
Stay, submit more stories and attract more readers or go - no-one is all that bothered either way.
A good effort - 4*s - but make up your mind what it is you want to do.
traci
Absurdly weird yet somewhat erotic. Your imagination seems to favour dominance of women and that is always a natural turn-on as long as the woman is given the chance to back out if necessary. Very different from what I've read before and I'm glad my boobs aren't that big as that sounds painful hahaha. Well done on the inventiveness
That was fucking amazing! The best story I've ever read! I want to know what else he does to her and what happens after that to her and does he do this to anyone else. Brilliant!