All Comments on 'Revenge On the Clarion'

Looking forward to the next one

Sex with black orderly and biracial baby bump ultimate humiliation of all. Lesbian conversion and downgrading of ones intellectual smarts to that of an uneducated worthless woman.

Great start to what could be a erotic series

If you aren't going to finish?

What is it like to invent a personality to get past a barrier that shields an institution from public scrutiny? What if the target discerns the sinister purpose? In our society, sub-societies may have limited rights: prisoners, students, soldiers, but still those whose rights are curtailed possess a zone in which their right to be heard must be respected to some extent. A person who slips over the wall of an insane asylum takes an awful risk. Nuts have no right to be heard. Thus if caught, an impostor is at the mercy of the institution. This theme has surfaced many times on the silver and small screen. Wifetheif deals with it in a grandiloquent fashion in REVENGE. Well done.

Chapter 1 does not make a story.

Please another chapter enjoyed it so much