All Comments on 'Reversals Ch. 04'

Good pace that allows the tension to build.

Nice start. Perhaps you should write longer chapters as the one pagers end even before a situation is taken to its logical end. Overall great theme. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Very good, well thought out so far. I like the way that you are taking time to introduce and develop your ideas. I think that I can see where you are going with this and look forward to the next part.

I've just got chapter 5 to read but I wanted to give you some positive feed back. Great story. You have an interesting and complex plot for erotica. Truly a joy!

So they'll both be able to breastfeed..?

..give them extra thumbs and they'll be 'Ler'

They can recruit Samantha into their 'Braid'

Well this train is going to a town I've never would have imagined. I paid for a ticket.

I might as well enjoy the scenery.

It is great the way you tease and tempt. I can't wait to read the next chapter as you have me totally hooked.