All Comments on 'Reverting to Type Ch. 02'

your effort really went down hill from the first story.

I disagree with anonymous. Other than a few cliches, I think Ch. 02 was just as good. Remember is a phrase comes easily in your work, ask yourselve if it is a cliche.

For the read.

Good first chapter, not so great second.

second chapter was a dud

Well that’s a different ending than I thought it would be

enjoyed this a lot until he left town. Wasn't keen on the tragic rumors.