All Comments on 'Rewarding Dad'

a very good read

It's very disjointed and confusing, but that's such a cool part of the appeal here. It's almost like a stream of consciousness thing. Can't wait for the next installment.

It is good alittle confusing when you get to the second page but still good

i love how you just add in past sexual encounters between dad and daughter, the blowjob on the way to school, etc. really hot! can't wait to read more

Thank you all for the comments--especially those who made the story a favourite!--it helped a lot in polishing some more the next part.

You need to get someone who is good with written English to read your work and show you just where you need to improve your writing. Reading work that has bad grammar in it detracts from the story. You need to do this before submitting any new work.

EXTREEMLY hard to follow... was she still fucking her dad in the kitchen, telling him of her exploits on becoming a stripper? Because at the beginning it sounded like she was on her was going home to see him, and then woke up the next morning with mom, being late for work, wanting dad to take her to school, & he fucked her on the table. Was it supposed to be: 1) On my way home to see dad, thinking of the days when he taught her to fuck, AND THEN 2) She didn't actually made it home, but while they hooking up behind mom's back, she was telling him about how she's now become a stripper?

I could not follow this at all. And you you are trying too hard to sound too smart. Far too many big words. You seem unwilling to go into details

Disregarding those with limited vocabulary and inability to follow a well written erotic play of words and tangled thoughts of an over stimulated, sexually aware daddy lover. Extremely well written, other than a few grammatical slips. Very sexually charged, beginning to end. A deep dive into the mind and needs of a father loving woman child exploring her sexual desires, wants, needs and fears. One of the best of it's kind. She plays with your cock, heart and mind. Awesome

more than loved it! oh so sexy and arousing and yes, more, more, more of this story .... please i want more!