All Comments on 'Rhapsody'

Beautiful story... I hope read more. Thank you....

As you will eventually note, I am on a Mat kick today. lol. This story keeps the rhythm that I have been following in your poems - tender - loving without being overly sentimental. The story flows in my mind, like liquid trailing across the curve of a breast, and I am moved.

You are indeed a wonderful author. What stands out most to me in this piece is "My mind has been wrestling with a slight problem, that of removing your other strap ..." It is this detail to reality that reinforces the beauty of the story.

Thanks Mat.

This story has so many wonderful elements. From the romantic ambience, elaborate buildup, climactic passion, all the way down to a teasing, suggestive ending, it has it all. Nicely done!

Mat, I am as always thrilled to read your work. This is the best yet. Romantic, passionate. It also shows the real meaning of love. Being satisfied in your lover's satisfaction.Thank you.as always.

I loved it, but then again, I am one who loves love.