All Comments on 'Rhiannon'

This is literally the BEST story I've ever read!! Please make more!!!

bad aussie writings

2 star

I loved this, a real romance out of nothing, no expectations, but you know this is what they both wanted without knowing it was coming, definitely 5 stars for the characters alone.

Well done!

....to be continued for at least another part.

Thanks for writing. Great dialog And description. Five star for sure.

Loved it , cheeky dialogues and likeable characters . Don't leave us hanging , more of them please !

I liked the story, but I loved the writing. So expressive but with an economy of words. Also learned some Australian terms along the way. Wonderful!

Great characters, very believable and true to life. Nothing over the top and very well told. Extremelyly satisfying in its girl-meets-boy simplicity. I'm glad you didn't continue it. This one deserved to end on the exact high-note it did.

This appears to be linked to The Only Lesbian In Town, another really well written story. Like all well written pieces I just want more!

Can’t believe only nine comments on such a good story: well drawn characters, and little suspension of belief...and exceptional dialogue

Chilleywilley

What a great little story! What superb characters, and so tightly drawn. The plot is simple yet compelling. We get to know these people, care about them, want to know more about them, and it ends on a note of hope. That’s quite an achievement in such a short tale.

I am even more a sucker for a story with details and a bit of humor.

to get laid. Now she has to deal with an oncoming relationship that hit like a freight train. I'd like to read a sequel to this story--where they don't have to worry about condoms anymore, and enjoy sex together at the fullest.

Lovely story.