by CaroSoft
Good Continuation of a sexy story . Well written , likable characters and hot sex . What more could a girl want.
Whether it is another chapter or a new story please continue writting as im enjoying your style.
Thank you
Sexy story. I like the slow build towards caring, loving sex. This is a lovely story with unique & likeable characters so I would love for this series to continue. Yeah, I'm greedy about wanting more of what I love. 😋
A very yummy second chapter! I hope there’s more to follow! Thank you!
I very much enjoyed this chapter, and the whole story so far! Thank you for sharing this with us!
damn what a beautiful story . such romance and love ? -please let there be more . thanks for sharing your awesome writing here.
A really beautiful story, well written. Looking forward to the next installment
When will chap 3 be posted. Pls dont let us wait for another year for it.
........... read it, loved it, gave it 5 stars but forgot to leave a comment.
Well thought out and delivered. The way you are treating your main characters shows that you care about what happens to them!!
Congratulations on a great Part 2.
You are a realy good writer if you ask my humble opinion but i wanted to hear more about Charlie the question Lauren asked why did she leave the lizzards did not get an answer
I loved it but was still hungry for more background and storry in general and you set it up perfectly to make us curious and then suddenly it is the end
I hope you will write more chapters for this one i think it deserves more closure
But thanks for writing and sharing your storrys i realy do love reading them
Nice—again simple and sweet—but clearly not an ending in any sense of the word.
Far too many stories here on Lit left in this state.
Sad. I always wonder what happened...