All Comments on 'Rhythm Ch. 02'

by CaroSoft

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love this!

I really enjoyed this chapter! Will there be more?

stroudlestroudleabout 6 years ago
Great chapter

Good Continuation of a sexy story . Well written , likable characters and hot sex . What more could a girl want.

Whether it is another chapter or a new story please continue writting as im enjoying your style.

Thank you

CliterateDykeCliterateDykeabout 6 years ago

Sexy story. I like the slow build towards caring, loving sex. This is a lovely story with unique & likeable characters so I would love for this series to continue. Yeah, I'm greedy about wanting more of what I love. 😋

TSreaderTSreaderabout 6 years ago
It’s getting hotter 🔥

A very yummy second chapter! I hope there’s more to follow! Thank you!

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 6 years ago
Very good chapter 2!

I very much enjoyed this chapter, and the whole story so far! Thank you for sharing this with us!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

damn what a beautiful story . such romance and love ? -please let there be more . thanks for sharing your awesome writing here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

A really beautiful story, well written. Looking forward to the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
What happen?

When will chap 3 be posted. Pls dont let us wait for another year for it.

alexwatson62alexwatson62about 5 years ago
LOL, DONE IT AGAIN ...............

........... read it, loved it, gave it 5 stars but forgot to leave a comment.

Well thought out and delivered. The way you are treating your main characters shows that you care about what happens to them!!

Congratulations on a great Part 2.

Sophie160987Sophie160987over 3 years ago
Great but

You are a realy good writer if you ask my humble opinion but i wanted to hear more about Charlie the question Lauren asked why did she leave the lizzards did not get an answer

I loved it but was still hungry for more background and storry in general and you set it up perfectly to make us curious and then suddenly it is the end

I hope you will write more chapters for this one i think it deserves more closure

But thanks for writing and sharing your storrys i realy do love reading them

okami1061okami1061almost 2 years ago

Nice—again simple and sweet—but clearly not an ending in any sense of the word.

Far too many stories here on Lit left in this state.

Sad. I always wonder what happened...

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