All Comments on 'Ria and Ryan: The Bath'

...is it ended too soon.

Wonderful, wonderful!!. i havent read ur work before, but found this in the new posts list. Great scene setting (the bathroom being my fav), and sensual sex between two obviously loving ppl. i have to say it got me a little warm. i agree with the other poster...just not long enough.

Great work though.

brilliant writing, I could almost feel ryan's movements. they were described so vividly.

Lovely! Yes!

Such a sensual tale. I felt myself being in Ria's place, feeling her lover's hands on her body, his hands roaming her entire body, not just her genitals and breasts. This is truly a wonderful love story.

... leaves me feeling kinda cheated......

Lukas

This story is great. I can't wait until more of the larger story is put out for us to read. Well wrote and well thought out. Definately a writer to keep our eyes on.

Great story..says so much about the author...mmm so good..your a "goddess"...

Perfect. Loved it.