All Comments on 'Richard Longrod, This Is Your Life!'

by bluefox07

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
LOL

Nearly pissed myself. Love the use of typos. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Outstanding!

Creative and humorous.... a welcome break......

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satyricon.21satyricon.21almost 17 years ago
long overdue...

... and it works on every level, but is it a parable, an examplar, or a how not to?

coaster2coaster2almost 17 years ago
Very Good, but too close to the truth!

I'm worried that some of the contributors will take this to heart and begin to write stories with plots and in-depth characters. My god, man, what have you done?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
A Little Too Much

Lost my interest about half way through. Up to then was ok.

bluefox07bluefox07almost 17 years agoAuthor
FROM THE AUTHOR...

To the previous post... that's okay. I too am often subject to frequent spells of narcolepsy while reading erotica... Cheers!

YgraineYgrainealmost 17 years ago
Wonderful!

I really enjoyed it. I'm glad your characters decided to rebel - mine do it all the time!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hey Whoa Waita

This Documentary belongs in the Documentary Category - You know "That Truth is Stranger than Fiction" Sub Segment.<P>

Emblematically not as true here as at other sites though.<P>

The end - with thanks <P>

[Next - the red headed lap sucker gone wild with nothing to gain?]

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Excellent...One of the Best I've read....

...Please keep it up. I'd love to see this in a series in and of itself. The best stories on here are the ones with a good story and good sex. I wish everyone realized it. Please keep it going. I want Richard and Fanny to get a good story and stop being cliche's

simply_cynsimply_cynalmost 17 years ago
I'll "wake your wank" ... *snickers*

OMG! lmao!!! I remember when you first told me about this idea. I was laughing so hard, I nearly peed myself. I am sooooo glad to see that you went off and did it. Check your e-mail, damn it! *laughs*

Keep up the good work!!!

~ Your saucy lil lass ~

KOLKOREKOLKOREover 15 years ago
Richard is looking for a piece of...respect

It’s “As time goes by” meets “Six Characters in Search of an Author” meets “Who’s on first” meets “Lady Chatterley” – funky nutty and self deprecating, in short - a chaotic funny piece. <P>

The only ‘but’ I have is that to the extent to which the meaning of the Spanish segments could not be stipulated by the context, it was a minus. Still, it was not so pronounced as to take away from the overall fun.

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