by bluefox07
... and it works on every level, but is it a parable, an examplar, or a how not to?
I'm worried that some of the contributors will take this to heart and begin to write stories with plots and in-depth characters. My god, man, what have you done?
Lost my interest about half way through. Up to then was ok.
To the previous post... that's okay. I too am often subject to frequent spells of narcolepsy while reading erotica... Cheers!
I really enjoyed it. I'm glad your characters decided to rebel - mine do it all the time!
This Documentary belongs in the Documentary Category - You know "That Truth is Stranger than Fiction" Sub Segment.<P>
Emblematically not as true here as at other sites though.<P>
The end - with thanks <P>
[Next - the red headed lap sucker gone wild with nothing to gain?]
...Please keep it up. I'd love to see this in a series in and of itself. The best stories on here are the ones with a good story and good sex. I wish everyone realized it. Please keep it going. I want Richard and Fanny to get a good story and stop being cliche's
OMG! lmao!!! I remember when you first told me about this idea. I was laughing so hard, I nearly peed myself. I am sooooo glad to see that you went off and did it. Check your e-mail, damn it! *laughs*
Keep up the good work!!!
~ Your saucy lil lass ~
It’s “As time goes by” meets “Six Characters in Search of an Author” meets “Who’s on first” meets “Lady Chatterley” – funky nutty and self deprecating, in short - a chaotic funny piece. <P>
The only ‘but’ I have is that to the extent to which the meaning of the Spanish segments could not be stipulated by the context, it was a minus. Still, it was not so pronounced as to take away from the overall fun.