All Comments on 'Rick and Molly Pt. 02'

If chapters are going to be so far apart, please post longer chapters, these less than one page chapters break the flow of a story, wish I could give you more than 3*

Again, it took about 45 seconds to read this chapter. Although I'm interested in what happens next, I'm not going to bother reading until there are enough chapters to be worth my time. Good luck with your writing. I would suggest you make Abby & Trish a little less one-dimensional.

Your main characters have a naive sincerity that is quite appealing. The story moves with a slowness and a hesitancy like real life. I also really like the Canada connection. I like Rick and Molly and I'm looking foreword to seeing how things go between them.

So many authors don't get to finish their stories. This would have been an excellent series!

"Lord Lieutenant" Great name for a 50's calypso singer! Guess he just lost interest in the story. That's more than OK since it wasn't going anywhere anyway. 2