by LordLieutenant
In most cases, and I am again sorry, but I do not see much if any thing of romance, unless you plan expanding, on your existing contribution. Sounds like you could use two things a muse, and an editor. Possible you posted in the wrong category ?
North
This is just Chapter 1, or a prologue if you like. I am working on other parts even as I write this.
Hope your chapters get longer since it took less than a minute to read.