by Ford2020
every family should have one.
WELL WRITTEN CHAPTER #1...THESE TWO GUYS...NEED TO 'RAISE THE BAR".. ON FAMILY FUN..AND DO JUST THAT...INCLUDE/SEDUCE WHO EVER..BUT..
MORE FAMILY..NEEDS TO BE INCLUDED.. MOM..AND DAD... ESPECIALLY DAD.. FOR REALLY
HOT" BI" STUD...DAD/SONS ACTION.. WITH MOM AS PART OF IT...FOR SEX-CHARGED... MOMS/WOMEN LIKE ME..NOTHING MORE OF " DRIPPING WET"... TURN-ON...
THAN THAT TYPE OF SCENERIO..AND FOR CRITICS WHO PUT A NEGATIVE SPIN ON THAT..IGNORE THEM..THEY DON'T KNOW WHAT THEY ARE MISSING..TRUST US...WE KNOW
a HUGE asshole! he's too cocky and self centered. and users are a total turn off.
Hi, I just read this after your newer story. I think I like this even better since it can go in a lot of different directions. The direction that interests me most is dear old dad and how he submits to Rick, but I'm not sure about the HEA. I think Rick gets Pete, but what about Bobby and Dad? Lots of interesting opportunities here. I'd like to read more here too. You tell an interesting story and your characters draw in the readers. Write on. Thanks!
This is is amazing! Like another commenter said, I read this after your newer story, and I love this one even more! You are an amazing author, and I would like to see more of this story too! :D
This story is absolutely perfect, and I think I'll die happy now. O.o