All Comments on 'Rick's Story Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Slow start, picking up speed

This story started off slow, but it seems to be developing well. The writer's style is appealing. Grammar and spelling are good.

My impression is that this is a 10-part story, but we can only see the first two. Frustrating.

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