All Comments on 'Ride of My Life'

by Tomsparty

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
More Please

Great Start I couldn't resist a fumble and am now very wet. Please write more. Loved the detail, just enough, mm, great.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very well written . . .

but sort of sad too. I'd like for one of your characters to be loved for what she is and feel good about herself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Wow... Amazing!

You have excellent description, and are a very good writer. I would like to read more on this story... I think he should go all the way and live as a she from now on, and in fact probably should end up bent over that log.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
what next

bent over log.... sex with jane. Accident on bike resulting in broken leg and special attention from jane and other girlfriends...

sissyboycuckoldsissyboycuckoldabout 16 years ago
Excellent story!

Great detail. I really liked this story and want to see it continue. Dave should definitely bend him over that log. Mary's initiation could be all the girls and boys abusing and using him in every way imaginable. He could also have a bike accident that has him lose his testicles so he is more willing to live as a girl and Dave's girlfriend. Johnny should humiliate him some first and then make him his slave as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Need more...be his girlfriend.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 9 years ago
more as the pretty girl

more please.. have his adventure continue into womanhood

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
your story

i absolutely loved your story please do a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Definitely deserves a sequel!!!

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