All Comments on 'Ride to the Hotel'

...to say April Fools!!! I call Bull S#!T.

Needed slower pacing frankly.

Uninstall word plz

Seriously? You forgot to put

- Ridiculous Fiction - in the tag lines.....

Finish the story, she's hooked on his cock, and then her belly will swell !!!!

15? That's a very VERY big stretch of the imagination even for this site. (No pun intended)

It is today first of April if you think 15 inches. I quit reading if penis is more than 8 inches and breasts are DD or more.

Most hotels in Myrtle Beach can see the ocean!

Yeah I'm sorry but it was a ok start but such a bad story so unbelievable

Agreed with other comments, but the major issue was grammar. Your sentences had no continuity jumping and skipping around with erratic movement. There were no smooth transitions...great promise, but be realistic and slow down your pace

Completely unbelievable.

I'm into it.

Part 2!!

When the story got to a 15" cock I had to stop.Mom never seen it before this bullshit. FANTASY

Landed in Myrtle Beach and they're a 2hr. cab ride from the ocean? OK...

I find comment hard. Sure this is funny and sexy fantasy. Totally unbelievable but funny. I liked the style, quick and picturing.

not a believer, too much dick in such a tight space

This couldn't be any hotter!

I love how every comment is like “oh this is unrealistic and all” and blah blah blah…..but have any of you checked the date of this story? It’s 04/01/2016” meaning it’s April fools, even if they didn’t put it at the story it’s suppose not to be taken seriously, ether you all didn’t see the date or are just blind