All Comments on 'Ridiculust Ch. 16'

getting more REDICULUST everytime

Just exactly which 'Left Field' produced this chapter??? This made ABSOLUTELY no sense and contradicted EVERYTHING you've written up to this point regarding Rodger and Jeannie; his dreams of her leading him through some mall, how he got to tnus town, how she got to this town, the grove. Everything for15 chapters is out-the-window.

Delete this chapter, then you need to re-read your own story, up to this point and seriously rethink how to introduce Aphrodite.

You are correct. I need to add more here to reveal that this is the main reason Roger was induced into starting the adventure in the first place and that he had to forget his dreams and meeting Aphrodite. I will also have to figure out why. 8-) While I am at it, I can explain what the source of the magic in the grove is... I will work on this as quickly as I can.

Thanks for taking the time to read my story and to write a comment.

The updated version of the chapter was uploaded sometime today. I hope that you all enjoyed it.