All Comments on 'Riding the Wolf Ch. 02'

That was definitely a really great read. Wow, the interaction between them was hot. He was so gentle and careful with her, what a guy! I know I'm going to fall asleep with a smile on my face tonight! Please continue this story, I can't wait until you update.

Very well done. I wish I could write like that. I have a full submissions page and none of them are dealt with such careful crafting. It would be great to get some feedback from you about my own writing. Anyway... awesome stuff. :D

This chapter is a stark contrast of the previous one.

And you got an interesting set of characters.

Good job ^-^b

Maybe next time, you could separate your paragraphs ^^

Really nice twist wasnt expecting that, hope the rest of the chapters are as good! :D

Glad you all enjoyed it! Not sure about the comment about separating the paragraphs, though... I have some long paragraphs, but there are many of them, with a whole line of separation.

So the next chapter will be focusing a lot more on character development, Rosita in particular, who only in the end of this Ch was able to really assert herself. Should still be able to throw in a few sexy scenes.

It sounds like he may want to continue some kind of relationship after he kills Raoul. I don't think that her grandmother would entirely approve, but it's not her life.

Love the new twist with the Hunter! I can't wait for the next chapter look for it everyday hoping you have posted it!!!!! Keep writing !

Any day now! There should be at least one more chapter after the 3rd but maybe more, we'll see how it goes!

awesome i do hop these stories last more than a few chapters. awesome story