by radk
OH BOY! Did he get himself in deep do do and he's will be somewhere over the Rainbow! A long time ago in a far far away universe! There once was a Guy called Charlie! And what do you say Charlie H* E* L* P.
THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR MAGNIFICENT STORY WITH US ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ WOOF!
You do have a way with plot twists, ironicisms, and neat plot hooks with which to blindside us.
Please write more for Lit.
What was that saying about if something looks too good to be true ....... poor Charlie.
It was kind of obvious from beginning to end but it is fun...
OK that one was short and sweet - funny too. Well written. By the way, why can't we see comments on that statute of limitations story?
Well written, unique plot line, good combination of action and plot to keep me reading. Good work, so far. I can't wait for the subsequent chapter(s).