All Comments on 'Right or Left? Ch. 02'

That was hot. I just jizzed into my wife's dripping wet panties as she jacked my cock while I read her the story.

Wow, you have a few weeks before they take their trip. How about more threesome activity? Maybe some anal too. It would be cool to include the girl who isn't going on vacation in on the activities in the next chapter.

For someone who happens to literate, deciphering your meaning is distractingly distracting.

Thanks.

Every now and then there appears on this site a story that tends to stand out and make you want to go back and read it again, this is one such story.

Yes okay, it has some grammatical errors so what. Don't worry too much about the "grammar police". Please continue on with it and don't leave it half finished like many other authors can tend to do, as this story has much potential

I cannot wait for the next chapter. You have some serious talent.

HOT....looking for more!!!!

There wasn't any mention of her hymen. Her Dad was so strict and she was so virginal.

Will you tell us more. Also, Jeff came in her cunt. No condom and she had mot started the pill yet. AWESOME story

Can't wait for the next chapter

F*cking fantastic. 5 stars. loved it. on to chapter 3!

This chapter, with the description of the shopping trip, is a rare masterpiece!

Your going to have trouble fixing this you messed it up should have left out the other 2 girls there is reason why it's a incest and taboo story main wording incest besides that you made him look like a abusive man who for all purposes raped her maybe not in the since you or others may think rape means but still rape he used her submissive nature to do things with her while it's possible to fix it there very few people in the world that process the know how and the kinda of skill it would take you maybe one of those people I don't know but In my opinion I think you should have dropped it after this story