All Comments on 'Right Time, Wrong Room Ch. 02'

That was pretty hot, but you really need to edit it better. The numerous errors were very distracting.

A good second part of the story..but where is the third chapter? Is Sean and Step going to have a relationship as he and Tracy do? it would be nice to see them all get closer together..look forward to seeing if there is another chapter soon..

Mom needs to get to the source and get Her pussy taken care of by both Sean and Tracey.

Just a little fast for mom to get between Traceys legs, though.

It is erotic.

Yeah where are the next chapters? Run into a time log?

That's why it's sooooo RIGHT! Blazing hot as damn hell Nem. Chapter 3 soon?

mate u really need to edit the spelling mistakes.

great story tho!

But, I had to give it 5 Stars for content!

can't wait til chapter 3....story realy hottin up nw

typical you never finished this story just like you fucked up the end to a boy in babeland i'm glad you stopped writing

DBRS

I think the ideas you have are enticing, however it is apparent that you need to use spellchecker on your work before you submit it because the atrocious spelling certainly detracts from the story. You also need to figure out how to use proper punctuation as it is very distracting. I do like your ideas but your work needs polish. Why did you not finish this?

The story line is very good but the miss used words are a real turn off and irritating. One or two is ok but 20 or so you Kneed bedder dictinoarie

Say if Sean joins in

Please get an editor. You have various grammar and spelling mistakes and at one point called Tracy Joan for some reason. I couldn't keep reading due to that.