by anon_temptations
Well written, damn hot and above all else very touching. Next part NOW!
Please get that last chapter up as soon as possable! that was not a good place to read your readers, but the story is magnificent!!!
I really love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter...HURRY please :)
I swear I almost cried when it ended on that part. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Very glad that I can go right on to chapter 4 now. What a place to leave readers! I should write more, extolling the virtues of your writing, except I have to get to reading that next chapter. Love it!
YES! Someone who knows the true meaning of penultimate! I have a pet peeve about people misusing that word... You are awesome, and I will probably comment again on the next chapter, which I am about to read, but I just wanted to mention my joy about your correct usage of penultimate.
I really wish there was a little more to the conflict than Tom catching them kiss, but i don't mind since I know it will all end happily