All Comments on 'Riki and Cassandra Ch. 02'

by warmandgentle

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SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkalmost 10 years ago
Great Follow Up

So glad I was able to read Chapter 1 & 2 in a single setting, it helped to bring the story to life for me. I love the onset of a relationship, the gentle exploration, learning the likes and dislikes of each other. You tell this love story with such a gentle touch, and you don't force the action. I imagine you are now contemplating the upcoming bedroom scene, writing and editing it as you go, perhaps even becoming a bit aroused with the passion you're giving to your characters. Its time to make you a favorite, a good author is not easily found here and when found its a sin to lose them. Another five stars for your collection - well earned - Kevin

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 10 years ago
So like me

Cass - tall, debonair, passionate, great sense of style, patient, and sweet, like moist delicious German chocolate cake

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A pleasure

What a pleasure to find yet another writer on this site who can actually write good prose with correct spelling and punctuation. It makes all the difference to a story to know that the author has taken the time and trouble to get it right. Keep up the good work, Warm&Gentle.

laurabodenlaurabodenabout 2 years ago

Oh, so warm and gentle, wish I could read more of your sweet story...

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