All Comments on 'Riley and Jae'

Mmmmm very hot.

not a bad start, I know about math being a killer sometimes, and you do need to take breaks in between studying so what you have learned can sink in

This is a very good beginning for a continuing story. Although one page is a little short , it was quite enjoyable. Looking forward to next part. You have very good potential. Keep up the good writing.

It was pretty good but it was too short. Also you should turn this into a series

I loved it and it needs to be continued pls!

Write more

Great story for a beginner story. You really set up the storyline with good descriptions of the characters and the setting of the story. The only distractions, to me, was the use of drugs but that is a personal preference.

butch on butch... my favorite... more please

Need more stories like this!!!!