All Comments on 'Riley's Bar Ch. 08'

by Just Plain Bob

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JimSensesJimSensesabout 14 years ago
Revenge

I realy like what you have done with this story but I htink that after all his wife and the lawyer did to him I would like to see them both pay for it. After the lawyer settles everything I would send out the packages to the church, his wife, the bar association, and her friends and family to show what kind of people they are. Or at the very least send the package to his wife and then file the alienation of affection suite even if it is only for $1 to have it on record. But I would at least ruin him career wise and her reputation wise. Great story.

bruce22bruce22about 14 years ago
Enjoyable Story

You dish out an excellent meal.... I wonder if the revenge dish is worth

eating. There are so many other interesting possibilities out there so why waste time in revenge?

C_frommnC_frommnabout 14 years ago
Very Good Story

Like the way things are working out for Rob. cant wait to hear what Elaine wants from him. Maybe forgiveness or the Original offer of $600

sounds good compared to Nothing.

sexmatesexmateabout 14 years ago
Very interesting chapter.

Yes it will be interesting to see what Elaine has to say.

And where will the relationship with Candy go?

Will Marge and Susan extract any revenge. Or worm their way back in?

Thanks for writing!

Danger09Danger09almost 12 years ago
What about Elaine

I'd like to hear more about Elaine & less about robs conquests.. I want rob to burn the bitch at the stakes but I'm only reading bits & peaces of her & more about his sexual escapades.. It's getting sort of boring

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Alright

Now we have a good set up for the last chapter. Finally. Will Rob hook up with someone for keeps? Maybe Rob gets back with the ex? We'll see...

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 9 years ago

Best chapter yet. He finally gets his act together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Why would he ever call Elaine?

And I'm glad he dumped Marge and Susan. That was a bad combination looking for someplace to wreck. Maybe he can move away, buy a house and find a good woman? We'll see.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

fuck elaine for now and evermore.

enderlocke77enderlocke77over 1 year ago

Riley's Bar should rename it Riley's whore house would make more money

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...

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