All Comments on 'Riley's Exploits Pt. 01'

Keep practicing and get an editor to help you with the mechanics.

I loved this. It was so graphic and I look forward to more from you.

Just a minor hiccup or two but other than that a well told tale and quite steamy.

She describes how special her husband treats her then fucks his friend because he doesn't screw during halftime?! I'm sure if and when Harry finds out what a cheating cunt she is, he'll get a hard on and find more people for her to screw.

It's well written and I like it, but... Going from being bad, to a loyal wife and then relapsing back to a bad girl? I don't know. It didn't seem right with me with Te way you described the husband. Just because she got horny during the halftime. Nonetheless, well done.

People come on Literotica to read porn,and then moralise about wife cheating on husband,it's fiction folks,if you don't like don't read it.

not sure of plausibility but definately descriptive.