All Comments on 'Rin Ch. 03'

A very beautiful setting. Please continue with the brother and sister secretly fucking as her belly grows with his child, and her husband knows no different.

All of your stories are the same They're identical Only the names change..The identical plot line of all of them is - Powerful man rapes (eventually anally) weak or defenceless female who is frequently either pregnant or is made so by the rapist. No character development and all the people involved are essentially soulless screwing machines. You clearly have the intellect to write welland in fact you do write fluently but you are also clearly obsessed with the same story. This obsession says to me that a story about you rather than the story about who you might like to be would in fact be much more interesting. At least it would not be so repetitive . 50 for writing quality alone

That story was great. I cant wait to read the next

This story has my favorite themes; adultrous wife conceives with lover, and then manages to fool her hubby into thinking the child is his, AND, you have really made it juicier by adding the kinky TABOO of incest and having her actually get pregnant by her own brother and dupe hubby into believing he is the father and raising the child as his.